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Sometimes, this is how i vent.

I have what I want,

Quite beyond my need.

But there’s something missing,

Which isn’t at all greed.

A feeling of passion

At the same time morose,

A longing feeling, which suddenly arose –

In my head and in my heart –

One sudden bleak evening.

When sanity was lost

While misery set in.

The clouds have parted

Showing the lucent full moon.

A growl of fury, escaped my throat –

Coarse and sore, as it already was.

The night has begun,

I said my farewell.

7 comments:

Kina. said...

i like it,
the beginning esp. :)

Jonni =] said...

this poem is so good i mite steal it and use it for my english exams >=]

Bam! It's Sam. said...

thanks kinaa :)
and aha jonnny
you meanie :P

<3

Noel St Augustine Meldan said...

Nice one,

"One sudden bleak evening.

When sanity was lost

While misery set in."

I like this!

Bam! It's Sam. said...

thanks :D
i didnt even think when i wrote this
the words just come flowing :)

Anonymous said...

Me thinks what Sanam needs is human blood , sounds to me like Sanam is a hungry vamp . :P

On a side note , it's a fairly good descritption of emptiness transcending into anger .

I think you might appreciate T.S Eliot's Preludes. He does a very good job describing emptiness and the sordid decedance of everyday life , which is what i think the theme of your poem is. Plus , he is a marvelous job with alliteration . XD

Me apologizes for analyzing , it's a hazard from taking literature . XD

Bam! It's Sam. said...

lina, stfu :D